work on this essay make it better than it is see the attachment requirement and follow them carefully also I attached my old work .
this is a coummant back from my teacher
Here is a sample of how your essay should look on the page when you use MLA style: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide/mla_sample_paper.html. See my comments on the essay as well. I have also downloaded the essay and reformatted the page layout and I attach it here: 20191029050903video_analysis.docx. Please use these models on your next paper.
As you can see, when the big spaces between paragraphs are removed and your essay is formatted correctly, it is still a page short of the minimum required. It is also missing three required sources. There is room to continue to develop this if you decide to revise it for the final portfolio.
If you revise it, you can also work on your thesis. For example, do you think Wode Maya was successful in using those rhetorical strategies? You should have a position on how effective the video is.