Hi there i want you to revise the literary analysis essay based on this comment:
It looks like your thesis is actually that the theme of this story is recklessness. Say that directly and move that sentence to the end of the introduction.
Then make sure that each paragraph illustrates how recklessness is at work in this story. The first few paragraphs start to do this, but then the paragraphs move away from this theme. Questions to consider: How does the main character demonstrate recklessness? How do the other characters? Is recklessness viewed as a positive or negative in the story?
The last sentence of each body paragraph should point back to the thesis- how did this specific paragraph help build the argument?