revise essays 4

Section 3: Case Study 1.

1. Revision statement. Students should describe in no more than 500 words how they addressed

feedback from classmates, the writing lab, and/or the instructor.

2. Revised essay.

3. Original essay.

Section 4: Case Study 2.

1. Revision statement. Students should describe in no more than 500 words how they addressed

feedback from classmates, the writing lab, and/or the instructor.

2. Revised essay.

3. Original essay.

Section 5: Case Study 3.

1. Revision statement. Students should describe in no more than 500 words how they addressed

feedback from classmates, the writing lab, and/or the instructor.

2. Revised essay.

3. Original essay.