revise essays 4
Section 3: Case Study 1.
1. Revision statement. Students should describe in no more than 500 words how they addressed
feedback from classmates, the writing lab, and/or the instructor.
2. Revised essay.
3. Original essay.
Section 4: Case Study 2.
1. Revision statement. Students should describe in no more than 500 words how they addressed
feedback from classmates, the writing lab, and/or the instructor.
2. Revised essay.
3. Original essay.
Section 5: Case Study 3.
1. Revision statement. Students should describe in no more than 500 words how they addressed
feedback from classmates, the writing lab, and/or the instructor.
2. Revised essay.
3. Original essay.