essay idea of human beings manipulating or accepting their natural life span revision 1

This assignment is a revision/correction on a completed essay.

Below are the reference links and attached the copy of the essay and report from teacher regarding the corrections.

https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2014/10/why-i-hope-to-die-at-75/379329/

https://www.popsci.com/ethics-living-longer/

https://www.popsci.com/forever-man-immortality-science/

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2948190/